課程標(biāo)題：2019年洛陽(yáng)雅思培訓(xùn)考試

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洛陽(yáng)雅思培訓(xùn)學(xué)校分布洛陽(yáng)市老城區(qū),西工區(qū),瀍河回族區(qū),澗西區(qū),吉利區(qū),洛龍區(qū),偃師市,孟津縣,新安縣,欒川縣,嵩縣,汝陽(yáng)縣,宜陽(yáng)縣,洛寧縣,伊川縣等地,是洛陽(yáng)市極具影響力的雅思培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)。

【文章內(nèi)容分析】

英語(yǔ)寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)高檔要求：應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯;語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有少許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致;有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。從歷年寫作高分文章來看，每篇文章都有 亮 點(diǎn)，即在用詞、造句或段落安排上都有獨(dú)到之處。

一、詞匯選擇 標(biāo)新立異

在寫作中 較高級(jí)詞匯 的使用主要是指使用《大綱》上沒有的詞語(yǔ)、使用通過構(gòu)詞法變化來的新詞、使用同義詞或反義詞等來代替常見詞語(yǔ)。

1)這棟房子在芳草街的一棟樓上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常見詞語(yǔ)，而situates in則是《大綱》上沒有的，屬于高級(jí)詞匯。

2)在周末我們做很多作業(yè)。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表達(dá)時(shí)沒有使用過于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大綱》詞匯end加后綴-less變化來的。

3)洗澡間和廚房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)時(shí)，B句使用了well furnished,這比good語(yǔ)氣強(qiáng)，也顯得生動(dòng)。

緊接著，作者強(qiáng)調(diào)，如果只一味強(qiáng)調(diào)成功而忽視失敗，我們就會(huì)漏掉人生中許多寶貴的經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)。

大學(xué)課堂的傳統(tǒng)的教學(xué)方式是，一個(gè)教授和二三十名學(xué)生每周見面兩三次，每次授課時(shí)間45到50分鐘。

二. 人數(shù)用阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字表示顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，但不定數(shù)量、近似值用單詞表示較恰當(dāng)。

Another unsuccessful endeavour was the Vietnam War. America sent troops to Vietnam to prevent the country from becoming Communist. However, after many years of struggle, the troops were withdrawn and Vietnam fell to the Communist party. But this failure had much value. On one hand, our failure in Vietnam led to an important lesson in successful war strategy. The experience of the fierce guerrilla warled to changes in tactics that later helped America in other conflicts. Also, the Vietnam failure helped change the American culture. People protested the war and the government responded to the voice of the public. These important changes show the value that can come from failure.

這種思辨特質(zhì)也是美國(guó)名校所青睞的，本文獲得高分也就不足為奇了。（不怕犯錯(cuò)，不怕好笑，就怕沒有獨(dú)到的見解，這種特點(diǎn)，與我們中國(guó)學(xué)生比較循規(guī)蹈矩的習(xí)慣并不符合。所以大家在組織觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，一定要注意規(guī)避中式英語(yǔ)及中式思維。）

這些問題主要是因?yàn)楣P誤引起，所以這次再版，基本保留第一版的原貌，僅去掉了筆誤，修正了表達(dá)不是很嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)牡胤健Ｔ诖讼蚋魑恢虑浮?/p>

但是泰坦尼克在一開始就是很boring的，有30分鐘就在那講打撈沉船的細(xì)節(jié)，在觀眾快不能忍受的時(shí)候，導(dǎo)演給Rose的眼睛一個(gè)大大的特寫，從那蔚藍(lán)的眼睛中霎時(shí)跳出了泰坦尼克號(hào)郵輪，這個(gè)經(jīng)典的愛情故事才算是正式開始了。

Based on the two passages, Douglass and Dana differ in their views of the effect of the CivilWar in that Douglass believes that the war has…（觀點(diǎn)）

第二節(jié)　方程組

2. It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it.

Perhaps another thing that gives this away is the asking of a question that cannot be answered correctly. One of the most popular examples of this is when a woman askssomeone if she looks fat in whatever she is wearing. It may seem like a simple, harmless question, but there is, in fact, no right way to answer this question. If the reply is yes, the woman will surely get angry and upset because now she thinks she's fat. However, if the reply is no, she will surely accuse the responder of lying. In situations like these, it may be best to just not answer at all. I know that's my father's philosophy when my mother poses such questions.

Soon, the politicians will revert back to what they all want power and continuous popularity. For example, George. W. Bush have been saying he will end the war in the Middle East since 2003. Now, in 2008, the war is continuing raging fervently.

for/from want of 缺少……

The flowers died from want of water.

花缺少水而枯死了。

Some of the wounded soldiers died for want of medicine.

有些士兵藥物而死去。

for the use of 供……使用的

This parking lot is for the use of employees only.

停車場(chǎng)只供員工使用。

This dining hall is for the use of teachers.

飯?zhí)檬枪┙處熓褂玫摹?br/>
in support of 支持……，擁護(hù)……

He spoke at the meeting in support of my idea.

他在會(huì)上講話支持我的想法。

They decided to stay in support of the new leadership.

支持新的班子，決定留下來。

so as to （做）……，以便（做）……

They made a lot of lively programs so sas to attract more children.

一個(gè)考生的SAT作文將由兩位閱卷者評(píng)判。

在A和B中，A在and后是個(gè)V-ing結(jié)構(gòu)，不能和and前面的名詞構(gòu)成平行，排除。

這種思辨特質(zhì)也是美國(guó)名校所青睞的，本文獲得高分也就不足為奇了。（不怕犯錯(cuò)，不怕好笑，就怕沒有獨(dú)到的見解，這種特點(diǎn)，與我們中國(guó)學(xué)生比較循規(guī)蹈矩的習(xí)慣并不符合。所以大家在組織觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，一定要注意規(guī)避中式英語(yǔ)及中式思維。）

(B)and people become more dependent

在SAT考試中，經(jīng)常也會(huì)考查下列結(jié)構(gòu)的平行。

ing in a natural tone, using figures of speech sparingly and omitting needless words.

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